Reflection 2.2

In my revision, I included further analysis and depth into how Chua's authoritative parenting style is detrimental to her child's self-esteem and overall mental stability. I used research that I had previously found but did not originally include in my first draft to provide ethos to the paper, drawing quantitative data results to back up the claims and counterarguments I was making with factual evidence from other studies. I feel as though this helped my paper out substantially; it really gave the paper more "umph" or a kick, for lack of a better word. The persuasive aspect of the paper was heightened through this addition, and aided the paper overall.